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Mock-heroic

An imitation or burlesque of something heroic.

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This tone is a form of reverse satire. Instead of using wit to criticize faults, wit is used to embellish faults and qualities.

This is most commonly used in poetry, where more contemporary authors use the classic ‘heroic’ style to turn trivial things into heroes.

An author who uses this tone for a piece, may not necessarily be mocking the subject of his poem, but the classical style of ‘heroic’ writing.

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“The artichoke
of delicate heart
erect
in its battle-dress, builds
its minimal cupola;
keeps
stark
in its scallop of
scales.
Around it,
demoniac vegetables
bristle their thicknesses,
devise
tendrils and belfries,
the bulb's agitations;
while under the subsoil
the carrot
sleeps sound in its
rusty mustaches.
Runner and filaments
bleach in the vineyards,
whereon rise the vines.
The sedulous cabbage
arranges its petticoats;
oregano
sweetens a world;
and the artichoke
dulcetly there in a gardenplot,
armed for a skirmish,
goes proud
in its pomegranate
burnishes.
Till, on a day,
each by the other,
the artichoke moves
to its dream
of a market place
in the big willow
hoppers:
a battle formation.
Most warlike
of defilades-
with men
in the market stalls,
white shirts
in the soup-greens,
artichoke field marshals,
close-order conclaves,
commands, detonations,
and voices,
a crashing of crate staves. “

_ Ode to an Artichoke (Pablo Neruda, from Elemental Odes)

To understand the mocking nature of this poem fragment, you first have to understand the nature of the Spanish Ode and a little about Pablo Neruda’s life.

Neruda, after suffering many hardships in his life, turned to the written word once again for comfort during the later stages of his life. During this time he wrote a series of poems entitled Odas Elementales in which he took a more embellished look at the simpler things in life. He took the Spanish Ode, originally intended to honor the lives of important figures, and used it into convey his message of simplicity and appreciation. He took common items and some of his close friends and enemies, and stressed their importance with magnificent use of hyperbole, figurative language, and personification.

In this poem, Neruda takes the common artichoke and transforms it into a soldier ready for battle. Although the artichoke has, in real life, a ‘tender heart’, (the core of the vegetable is rather tender) it is in no way a live or “delicate” heart, let alone a warrior’s heart.

Throughout the passage, with words like: “battle dress”, “scallop”, “battle foundation”, “warlike”, and “artichoke field marshals”, “close-order conclaves”, “commands”, “detonations, and voices”, Neruda uses the artichoke’s outer leaves, that serve to protect the inner core of the vegetable, to emphasize the ‘warrior’ in the artichoke.

Next time you encounter an artichoke, you wont help but notice its soldier qualities. You will find yourself imagining the story of the Great Warrior who lost the battle due to a romantic struggle with….

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Burlesque, imitation, ridicule, and satire.